Comments : Gothic Love

  • 10 years ago

    by Kate

    This is sweet and sad all at the same time.

    I like the rhyme in it but in my opinion, if you're doing end rhyme for most of it, you should do it for all of it. Otherwise the flow is a little weird.

    Anyway, I love the romantic part of this. Very beautiful and tragic.

    • 10 years ago

      by Ping Madriago

      Yay, thanks dear. It's a pleasure to hear that from you. I'll surely work on it 'cos at times, I also find it really awkward to read. Hihihi. Thanks!^^