Wow, I really enjoyed reading this, splendid poem!! The imagery and the story behind it were written wonderfully, bewildering job, two thumbs up

Its beautiful.. I mean the way you have expressed the feeling throughout the poem.. Nicely written.. Hope to see more from you like this one.. :)

At the end of my poem I forgot to write I could hear the footsteps of death nearing. *******
Thank you!.