The ending is visceral.I like this very much because I feel a bit uneasy about the conclusion..as if you speak with a little twinkle in your eye which suggests the
(I mean this here)deep ambivalence of life symbolized uniquely by the yin/yang principle ot taoism.with that symbol in mind I read ur poem and see in it that life and death,happiness and sadness are not absolute opposites...but moreso that ,as in the symbol,each contains something of the other,not merely interacting but inter-penetrating.whether u intend this or not u've sent me on a lovely trip wherein I feel closer to the pulse of nature.

For with love, peace is nt far.

Interesting piece.

A dream of a poem to reduce the full story in to few lines?
I believe you did it, without harming the story, you are brave and bold

Even I could ask fore more it is a nice poem