This was really different from a lot of poems I've read... I kind of like how it isn't so long, how it's only four lines yet speaks loudly and poetically about this loneliness. I like the thought of this, like you don't know who you are anymore and though there are so many people around you, you can only call yourself the real stranger. This read almost lyrically, I thought the first line would be a could song title or something!

Amazing and flawless. This is short yet effective. It still carried the essence of aloofness.

Keep writing:)

This is great idea to close the sad feelings into a hotel! I would read forth... so it was great!