Tell me what u think/what ud change/how can I make it better....this poem is very important to me and I'd like to make it the best I can possible make it ...so I need the help of my amazingly skilled poets ..thanks....all helps appreciated:)

I like the poem hits close to home.

In the second line I think you have put are instead of our

*They make us feel so unsucure
about the way we'd look
dress, talk or act
^ thought it might flow a little better this way

:)

Yep, the girls can be mean, I picture modern women like this.

Nicely dressed, a cup of coffee in one hand, the microphone cord in the ear, gossiping over the cell, gesticulation in the air...
I am wrong?

Nice poem... i agree with bianca :) but over all the meaning is there. reality :) this is real... great nicely written :)

Lol you had some little spelling errors but i really liked i may not be one of the "mean girls" but i am no underdog either lol i'm strong in my own way and will defend myself anyway possible lol but the matter of this poem is it's sad but very true that little brats are raised to be "better" than other people yet themselves hold as much faults as the next girl where they try to be "perfect" and look so fake in the process 5/5

Queen Ashlin