This is soooo wonderful, it blew me away completely, I couldn't stop reading it, outstanding poem, every line was talented and beautiful and outstanding, this poem is inspiring yet sad, outstanding job, by far my favorite of all of yours, 100/100, two thumbs up!!!

Wonderful poem! It can really tear you apart when you love someone who doesn't see their own value, or the value of their life. One improvement I'd suggest is that your rhyming pattern varies throughout- sometimes it's abab, sometimes aabb. Fixing that up would help to make the piece more consistent and help it to flow better. Other than that, great job :)

Beautiful and incredible. I could come up with a million other ways to describe this poem, but the list would be too long :) outstanding write.