Throughout this piece you incorporate a sadness, a heartbreak possibly... but in the end it's hopeful... that even in death, that person will still be in the depths of your heart... they are the ultimate meaning for your life and death.

Great piece!

This piece, it had that tone of sadness and heartbreak, but the faith and hope was there at the end and the smoothness and wording was beautiful at the same time...
I can relate to so many lines in this, it was penned really well.

One thing, in this line

"I close my eyes and your tearful face is all I see",

I would change it to

"I close my eyes and your tearful face is all that I see"

just carries the flow better from the previous line...

Really like this piece though...very emotional write

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The imagery in here is wonderful, you expressed the scene and emotion perfectly and I love the wording you used and the lines are enchanting, 100/100

The imagery in here is wonderful, you expressed the scene and emotion perfectly and I love the wording you used and the lines are enchanting, 100/100