I love your creative use of spacing and interjection! It add a visual element of emotion to the language that I appreciate. Beautiful testimony, wonderful summation of the Gospels. I believe this might work better as a hymn than a poem.

Thanks for that Mak, It could be a hymn as Jesus is the song in my heart. I remember in the Bible that at the Last Supper he sang a Hymn with the disciples, wish I knew which Hymn it was!

Ken