Comments : Paper Moon

  • 10 years ago

    by Ares

    Strong and consise poetry there, Lemon. The beat is slow and the words have a certain eerie ring to them that gave me a slight case of the chills. Well done indeed!

    Ares.

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is so beautiful, I love it!!! short but meaningful and sweet!!! Two large thumbs up!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I loved this title, as well. You created something very serene and beautiful nature setting yet has that melancholy feeling.

    Lovely write!

  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    I like how you wrote it! Great poem! The title is so reative.

  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    I like how you wrote it! Great poem! The title is so reative.