This is AWESOME! I truly love this bit of dialogue! You really captured the era and 'gangster' vibe with the language!

Lovely piece!!! I'd love to see more! Great idea

This is very 1920s mob/gangster attitude. You really have a knack for writing crime. This is very suspenseful, and you hear the old-timey sounding anger. It's so Rusheena ;) You have a fantastic style.

This is so cool.

Rusheena, I loved reading this! It was exciting, dangerous and you write crime very well and true to that time....the style definitely had a voice of its own and I could easily picture this scene in my head. If I was watching this in real life I would be frozen and terrified ah....Such a unique write, great challenge :]

I enjoyed this very much! Really sets the movie, "Bullet casings clinking on the wooden floor. Silence."

The MOB is perhaps the scariest mankind has to offer.

Wow , I have never read a poem in this form before, taken from a conversation point of view. I think you done amazing in the way of creativity here for the title. Very different indeed and fitting with the theme of SVU. Nice work girl x