Comments : Our summer

  • 6 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I completely adore this, even the form you have fits really nicely.

    Everyday is paradise...the sun shines even when the season of summer is gone. <3

    "I would bathe in your eyes"
    -LOVE this line, so romantic.

    I love your love poems, I can always connect with them and this is one of those that speaks to me.

    Wonderful pen!

  • 6 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    So beautiful Tony! The flow of this also just is beyond words and I'm almost left speechless. I love how memorable each line is and how it's like you don't need to say more because everything else is vowed, that warmth will always be there and even if the season is done with, there will still be love between you and a sun looking down on you...

    my favorite part was the Atlantic ocean line! I love that specific and it's my dream someday to go to the ocean, I've never been, which makes it all the more sweet and cherished Great write! :]

  • 6 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This is such a beautiful poem, the thought of someone eyes being so beautiful and deep that you can see yourself in them, just beautiful. When you truly care about someone, there is always a fire raging inside of you while you're with them, I totally can relate.

    Lovely....AL

  • 6 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very romantic... very passionate. Wonderful poem.

  • 6 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Oh my stars, Tony! This is so romantic! I feel all mushy now, lol. It's so full of life and energy, and imagery just blows my mind! Such a lifetime of words said in such a short poem, well done! I haven't nominated a poem in a while, but this one definitely gets my vote. Favorited as well. Great job, Tony :)

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    Atlantic oceans will never be as deep as the the beauty

    ^^ I think there is a typo, double "the"...
    unless it was intended.

    I like this poem, it reminded me of,
    well I like using the Atlantic ocean lol
    and the contrast of cold and warm in the poem was used too well.

  • 6 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow T, this is one of your best poems. It flows quite flawless and I enjoyed reading it at such an easy flow and pace.

    I do think you should lay it out differently though as it doesn't look as appealing as you normally lay your poems out, but I think it deserves a nice shape to it because it is a beautiful poem.

    Very lovey dovey wovey. Why is it not in the love category???