That is so meaningful and really spoke to me, I think it will touch a lot of people's heart, great expression of the topic, two thumbd up!

I agree with Cathy!!! This touched my heart, mostly because I have these thoughts as well :)

Allie, this is a really nice poem. I look foward to reading more of your writing. Gj!

I only see one very minor flaw here in the second line you should switch need and so or just drop the so from the line. :).

The start of this poem is very sad though. It always feels like people are judging us for our looks and problems. I do love how the first lines are in quotes like two people or one person is telling another person what to do and judging. There is really nothing to fear. It shouldn't matter what people think because people are beautiful on the outside the way God made them. Beauty should come from the inside and then out. Iove the last lines here because it shows how much this person cares and I love how you say they are not alone. We are never truly alone because all we need is that one person to care. I love the deeper message of this poem. Well done. 5/5

Adorable I didn't get a very moving feeling in my soul but that's just me although the poem had one error and redangelwings had it put down anyways good job hun

Allie. This is so beautiful yet sad at the same time.

I think every one of us gets judged or put down for something at some point in our lives.

Great write, Em

Allie. This is so beautiful yet sad at the same time.

I think every one of us gets judged or put down for something at some point in our lives.

Great write, Em

Allie. This is so beautiful yet sad at the same time.

I think every one of us gets judged or put down for something at some point in our lives.

Great write, Em