Chiez.......chiez..........i keep smiling here.....who's that one?
chiez.....???lol....i hate you chiezy..i can relate to it...a lot.....very very much....and it hurts a lot....wanting him always,,,but,,he dont have enough time for you...a lot of excuses,,,i hate it... its just a simple "HEY,DO YOU REALLY HAVE TIME FOR ME?"

just like that,than excuses...truth hurts but you must accept that....

great one chiez... =)

I could feel the pain behind this wonderful piece this poem speaks hw exctly i feel... thnks fr giving such a beautiful poem.. i loved it very much..:)

Wow really good! Really speaks about what you're going through. 5/5

I like it a lot, I like that you're not afraid of saying what you really feel in order to get the point across. You never let me down when I read your poems, I dont know... I guess I really love the raw emotions. Lovely write.

Enchanting Write, Enjoyed!!!