Comments : My Heart's Desire

  • 10 years ago

    by dindee

    Chiez.......chiez..........i keep smiling here.....who's that one?
    chiez.....???lol....i hate you chiezy..i can relate to it...a lot.....very very much....and it hurts a lot....wanting him always,,,but,,he dont have enough time for you...a lot of excuses,,,i hate it... its just a simple "HEY,DO YOU REALLY HAVE TIME FOR ME?"

    just like that,than excuses...truth hurts but you must accept that....

    great one chiez... =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Mams

    I could feel the pain behind this wonderful piece this poem speaks hw exctly i feel... thnks fr giving such a beautiful poem.. i loved it very much..:)

  • 10 years ago

    by Vermilion

    Wow really good! Really speaks about what you're going through. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    I like it a lot, I like that you're not afraid of saying what you really feel in order to get the point across. You never let me down when I read your poems, I dont know... I guess I really love the raw emotions. Lovely write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Enchanting Write, Enjoyed!!!