A very good piece, I feel the same about my mother so I can relate.

Keep it up!

This is a very powerful poem direct and straight to the point of the message well delivered. Emotional and not forced I would not change a thing

I feel the same ugh mothers

I like this poem so sad though and I can relate sadly my parents I dont have a great relationship with. One flaw in the fifth line was should be were 5/5

A very emotional piece indeed. Sometimes its difficult to make people understand our happiness and bad times. But I really hope your bond will get on better one day with your mom. Your longing for the mom-bond is evident here.

Good piece:)

Keep writing:))

Very sad and relatable.

I feel the same way with my mother