Wow, I haven't read your work in forever, and I apologize for that! I loved this, I felt the flow of thoughts running and also the emotion, whether it was an event or place in your life where you almost lost sight of you were.... it makes me think this "magic" is something happy or a love who makes you feel full and satisfied but does have side effects as you said, your walls go down and you rely on other things, your defenses are kind of put up.

Excellent write! I like the ease of this piece, without punctuation and just how you introduce more for the reader to ponder on. Take care :]

Love this, I like what it doesn't say rather than does, it is like a ton of unfinished sentences that go off like gunfire at each full stop (period)
Love the rhyming, helps motor it along nicely.
The title is awesome. What a great word.
well done

Tapping out the rhythm to this poem already makes me intrigued. Such a dark yet somehow innocent poem; I adore it. :)

Judging comment Weekly Contest June 17, 2013

I wasn't keen to the title of this poem nor to the poem as a whole, but after reading it for about five times. Funny, I started liking it. It has this mystery that itches me to find out what that place is call. The way the lines are broken and the rhymes makes the poem interesting to read. I like it, and at the end of the day this one of the poems that I remembered. Scribbles, ironic! they are hard to decipher so I guess that's why this poem is title like such. Oh and I also feel the emotion in this piece. Well done.

Judging comment Weekly Contest June 17, 2013

I wasn't keen to the title of this poem nor to the poem as a whole, but after reading it for about five times. Funny, I started liking it. It has this mystery that itches me to find out what that place is call. The way the lines are broken and the rhymes makes the poem interesting to read. I like it, and at the end of the day this one of the poems that I remembered. Scribbles, ironic! they are hard to decipher so I guess that's why this poem is title like such. Oh and I also feel the emotion in this piece. Well done.

Judge Comment:

Perfect piece here by Beautiful Chaos!!

I can't express enough how the rhyme scheme helps this chaotic masterpiece come to life.

Scribbles in the mind remind me of a graffiti painting, scratches on a frustrated thought. Etching memories and scattered moments leave me d angling in love with this poem. Its fresh, dark, descriptive and fashionable fresh!!

Explosive ending to a poem that has a rhythmic flow all on its own. Powerful piece!!

You just keep getting better and better.