I really love the opening, it sets off a very sensual scene...and the simile of the silk tickling her skin, that was unique because you wouldn't think that silk would tickle.

Very nice write!! One little typo I found though, towards the end.

"insid the silken sheets" ...forgot to add the 'e' to inside.

You are a wonderful love poet. :). I love this poem as well. 5/5

Very nice imagery and flow in this sensual poem

Love it c:

I love this poem. You are such an amazing poet! This was absolutely flawless

I love this poem. You are such an amazing poet! This was absolutely flawless