A song? :) Wow..... Love the path your writings taking and wish you all the best Robert! :))

Keep penning 'em :D

Oh when reading the poem with the music, it adds a soothing effect.

I just have one small critique

on this line:

Here were are again losing what we have

^^ here were? or here we are again?
The were can distract the reader

other than that I like the song 5/5

I like how you have managed to weave a song around the music..its nice and heartfelt..good one!