I'm obsessed with perfection,
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This line is good, it starts you out with an instant image of what perfection could possible be.
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constant tanning complexion,

I've lost all hope for affection,**
All I see are** my defections,

a circumspection** for* disconnection from the world, yeah I'm stressing.

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I really can't change a whole lot to it, for instance you use Circumspecting which isn't the actual usage of circumspect/ion. Its actually well done in most respects.
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Reminiscences essences taught me the lessons of regret.

I finish my last cigarette as I stare at my bleak silhouette

I'm up to my ears in debt, no income as of yet,

I'm depressed everyday,

Constant fear and dismay.

I can't see the end of the tunnel, it's been a hell of a day.

I wouldn't wish this on anyone and that's all I can say

I am never the hunter, all I am is the prey.

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You actually write really well, reminds me mostly of a rap or slow rap in a form of Linkin Park. My edits are just slight changes I would make (you don't have to use them at all) and I don't want to do too many as it would change the original flow of the poem. But Great Job! 5/5

I know how you feel.