Elegantly worded. I really enjoyed reading this, I didn't expect so much emotion. Lovely.

The scene you created here is quite dark and grim.
I like how you carefully crafted each line to tell of this scene and show that image of the vulture feasting....it definitely gives me a sense of foreboding and that you can't escape yourself. That your thoughts in your mind cannot stop haunting you.

One suggestion: "vultor" should be "vulture".
Good write!