Brilliant, brilliant!!! I love this dude, you put so much emotion into it and passion it is unbelievable, I completely adore it, please don't ever stop writing :) 100/100

Wow.. I'm just....speechless. Amazing write!!!!!

This is honestly one of the best things I have ever read. You are amazing with words, much more than you give yourself credit for. It's often hard for me to see things from another perspective when I'm also experiencing them. But this gave me a glimpse of the past year or so through your eyes. I just wanted to apologize for every time I should have helped but didn't. Even now, I catch myself wanting to make excuses about why I didn't, but there are no valid excuses for what I failed to do. I just wanted to thank you for writing this and let you know that I accept the challenge of writing something like this. While it is unlikely that I will post it, I will allow you to read it eventually. This really and truly touched me.
~Danna

I rate 5 not for the poem but for the writer...
Guys are really good in expressing their feelings through writing...really...

I idolized you not for cutting but for the love you had with Danna..

And it really makes me "wow"!!
That how really man loves...they will really give everything and anything...

But sad for you..(you have the right love at the right time but in a wrong person...) just my opinion...

just be happy for her if ever she had already someone...

LOVE is also SACRIFICING...even if it hurts a lot....learn to accept even if it is hard...

BUT before loving someone again..LEARN TO LOVE YOURSELF FIRST...IT IS THE MOST IMPORTANT THING...

"LOVE LIFE,so that LIFE WILL LOVE YOU BACK"

(its not from mine...i just got it from few readings...)

WEAR A SMILE....ALWAYS... =)

(and its not really a good feeling if im your girlfriend...its hard to let you go..
coz im caught in that situation..my conscience is killing me if i will..)

Wow!! Absolutely amazing!!! I love it. Great poem!

Awwwww i nearly cried since i fell in love once it wasn't like yours i was with the girl of my dreams for nearly 15years we were VERY young but there you go i know that shrinks "should" help but at time they just judge you i know what you are going through mine is a tad different than yours and it's an honor to know someone's past as you told yours i know my story isn't as true as yours but i had love and even if i had at least a month with her again i would hold it to my chest and cherish it throughout enternity what i'm trying to say let go of the sadness let go of the blade or whatever you used to use for self-destructive ways and embrace the fact that you fell in love once and it sucked but you know things get better a WHOLE lot better i'm healing myself and it's a miricle i don't cry or want to do what you did my dear friend i hope it works out! :)

Moria out

P.S. it's a 5/5 i'm giving you!

Though I can not understand why cutting
makes one feel better nor thoughts of
suicide.. I reach out to you, to your heart
for unfulfilled love, I am sadened by this
for what felt so real, so true yet Ive seen
the difference that one might see for
even our hearts believe.. Some little things
can bleed our heart but how can one
want to harm their selves for anothers heart
knowing they don't feel the same beating yourself
up because she only left you in pain there
is a love unconditional, unforseen even if
she may not one day all things will change
could there be a girl your not seeing
one who feels as you do.. These feelings
you believe are love are not for if you did
love her you'ld love her without want..