wow this is a good poem keep it up

Great poem. Will you check out some of mine? I wanna know if you like my newest one:

The last Car Ride... By *Nikki D*

wow..i loves this...i envy you! such talent..i especially liek this verse:
'They only see the outside
Not the blackened hole
That has consumed my heart
And taken over my soul'
so beautiful..and i can relate..highly <333
-Mortalidaga
xxx take care

this was very well-written