Stay Hidden

This is good. I enjoyed it so much. Thank for the comment on my poem. This is well written and a little different.

It is good. Grabs your attention and keeps it. Well Written and good detail.

I like this too as it gets your heart racing indeed. I love the imagery of the woods here. You are hiding from someone and that makes so many thoughts come alive. The blood on Your cheek is a great touch as it shows the abuse or hurt this person has been going through. The heart beat is great too as this person is so scared of someone and it makes me feel like something or someone is after her trying to hurt.

I can imagine this person running or limping with tears in her eyes from the hurt. Its sad though because guys can be so horrible so the wording was great here. I love the story feel here though as it makes your heart leap and feels like a true thriller. I love the ending too as it shows how people are when they are in the wrong minset sadly. We all feel hurt and its bad how people take it out on others. Great write though. 5/5

Pretty good, brought back all those nostalgic slasher movie memories