I dont know if it is a question for no answer but i suggest you tell him what you feel if not it will end hurting you
also i belive you poem is great it really touched me and i will like if ypu could give me you mail addres so i can share with you somo words and ask you opinion about a poem i wrote
thanks and really nice poem

Ok to answer your question. I think you should tell this person how you feel. Your heart does seem to shatter when you dont feel loved back. We I think all go through this at some point in our lives. Its great you stayed so strong though. I love the way you started this though because you get right to the point and you put your heart out there. That makes you stronger thanyou think. I hate when you realize that you still love that one pperson and you said you were happy fora while but the ffeelings are still there no matter what you do. I love the characters in the third stanza. The one you love seems to make your heart melt inside and his touch is your temptation. And you know or your heart knows you are still in love.

I love in the fourth stanza you describe his hair and eyes its a sutble thing that works so well here. I love you portray him as shy. I think love makes you that way when your heart is in love. Also when you are in love. Nothing seems to bring you down at all. Its hard to tell anyone how you feel at all. We seem to always play the scene out in our heads over and over again but never know the true words to say. We always want to hear I love you it makes our hearts happy and our brain scream out in delight. :) the ending I love because you show how much you truly love him and you just want to be in his arms and feel that closeness that only love can make you feel. 5/5