Very sweet poem i love the flow and the rhythm of it... awesome... :)

sorry but i saw a few letter much and less words but it can't affect the msg. of your poem.

100/100 very nice poem :)

Love this state of min you are telling about, there are one small error that confused me

Forever with you ill be

Now I read it as I'll

but a five is a five

I like this poem a lot at it shows your true love for this person. I'll help you with the spelling but its up to you to change it.

In the third line. Worrie should be worry. Disappears should be Disappear. The fourth line touches should be touch.night should be knight.

The second to last line could say I'll be with you forever that way it flows more nicely with the poem.

Otherwise I like it alot like I said it truly shows how much you care for this person. The imagery is so fantastic. I can see the smile on your faces when you see each other and feel your heartbeat. 5/5

Awwwww I love this poem so much, it is so sweet and caring and full if passion and love, loveeeee it!!! I nominated it I hope that is okay :)

Wow thanks :)

Wow Lovely poem.
And my lips form a smile at the sight of yours
You make me believe in fariy tales

nice lines.

A nice poem, but had few grammatical errors. My suggestion to you on your future poems is to use your spell check and proof read them before you submit.

4/5