Perfect rhyme and may I say, good job. Very sensual and has a very sexy appeal to it.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww

Great imagery here with your poem. It appeals to the readers' imagination very well. I seem to rather like it. Good flow to it.

Good write. Keep it up!!:)

I also love the senual feelings you bring here. The imagery is outstanding. A kiss always brings a great feeling of pleasure and love. So I loved how you focused on that a lot of the time. With the things you throw inbetween them though thats where this poem really shines. I love the attitude you present too as you don't care who looks at you. You are in your own worldand thats all that matters when yyou are in love :)5/5