This is so so sweet!!! She's certainly a lucky girl :)

Wow this is breath taking bravo bravo!! Two thumbs up??

I love this poem a lot. You are getting so much better!

The way you paint a picture of her is amazing. The details you share make us all feel like we are next to her in person. We all want to hear I love you from the one's we truly love. I love eyes also as they are Windows to anyone's heart and soul. When you talk about her smile... I would say makes my day instead of made my day. Made makes it seem like you saw it once and never again. I love all the feelings of warmth and peace you bring. 5/5

I loved it...

Great work. More please.

A really lovely poem, gentle and honest.xx