I love how this peice is filled with so many emotions deep with in. I love the feeling of heartbreak at first andthat is aalways difficult to deal with. Then when it seems all hope is lost here comes another person to catch your eyes. It might be hard at first because you still love another person but in time hearts always heal. Love makes your heart do many things. Friendship is very important with it. I love the story within this poem.It truly is hheartfelt and so lovely. It shows that true love can last forever. My favorite stanza is the last because its the end of the story and your love made it. The imagery is wonderful. 5/5
This poem is beautifully written! Your choice of
words made this a smooth rhyming piece filled with emotions. Its hard to write a poem which makes sense and at the same time make it perfectly rhyme without any hiccups..good job!