Comments : Focus

  • 10 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Its nice to see you post something new Hannah, and you're still writing. This is really a nice poem from you, though its more on the sad side of things, its still something nice to read. Keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Xerenze della

    Sweet..i like the feeling

  • 9 years ago

    by Valentino

    Nice flow of ink/well structured/great-theme/true feelings of heart... everything's well written. The choice words's excellent!

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Focus On Being Amazing, 5/5!!!