i thought it was a very hearfelt, inspired, and beautiful poem. Some of the words you chose didn't quite flow, but it was very captivating. Also you're pattern made it kind of choppy, but not hard to understand. I think you can be more creative in your writing style, although it's hard i know. Keep writing.

Sara,

Thank you for the comment. I am glad you enpjyed the poem. Also thank you for the advice i will remember it next time. Thanks

I really like this poem. I wish my ex would have written me something like that. Everything you said i could relate to. That is what makes a good writer. Keep it up.