I don't know if I would classify this as dark, but I still love it. I think often times people ask some of the very same questions you asked in this poem.

What really caught me though, is the way you described how the night it. I felt like o was there, not to mention it sounded really good when I read it aloud.

You keep this up, I'm not gonna be able to leave comments for being speechless lol. Great job!!

"Within my chaos, I find myself in question,
Why am I filled with such rage and aggression?
Why does it feel like like I'm being controlled by strings?
Why couldn't I be a bird or something with wings?"

That's exactly how I feel. I couldn't say it any better. You seriously know how to write the perfect words (: it's amazing Hun.