Comments : A love that changed

  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Wow... this cuts deeper than any knife ever could. Very powerful from from start to finish. I think my heart stopped for a while. Great job!

    • 12 years ago

      by HOLLYBXBE

      Aww thanks (: just basically wrote how I felt :/

  • 12 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Thia is a very lovely poem. I love how you put so much emotion into this. It seems that you are happy at the beginning then towards the end you fall apart. The wording you used is great and simple but it plays out well. Each line os full of great imagery and I love the power it holds. Though this is a love poem there are somany sad elements to it. Great write.

    • 12 years ago

      by HOLLYBXBE

      It's about my current relationship so it was from the heart. But thank you darling (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Mega Saint

    Bless at this :(

  • 12 years ago

    by Mega Saint

    Bless at this :(

  • 12 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by SplitSided

    This takes me back to how it used to be. I like it

  • 11 years ago

    by SplitSided

    This takes me back to how it used to be. I like it