Comments : The Pain

  • 10 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    The knife, the symbol of all end. Very powerful indeed. Great job

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Hey,this is so deep,.i can feel the pain..you have penned it so well...

    time is a great healer my friend..everything will be fine one day..so take your time..you will be okay..rreally and its good that you have chosen to let go and start new life ahead! Warm wishes! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    I hide the pain you put me throw with lies.
    ^^I like this line so much because once again I am related in your poem somewhere.
    we found the truth from our loved one but that is a lie.
    It's a big dissapointment for us.
    keep pennig my friend.