Comments : A flower in this dirty world (II)

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    How true, these innocents are flowers been made dirty by this unkind, greedy and hungry world who robs every girl's dream..a situation which can't seem to change!

    Touching write..

    Thank you for the comment on my write..take care.

  • 10 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    This piece...is remarkable. Very beautifully written. The concept itself is completely badass. The way the world deems this girl "dirty"; although, society is the ones who have made her dirty in the first place. Captivating me from the first stanza, I was drawn in even deeper with the heartbreaking lines of how screwed up our society is. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Yes dirty flowers are also grown up in a garden.some flowers we give to god.some flower fell down and become ...........I don't know what

    But we should not throw these flowers we should try to understand why they become dirty and help them.

    Nice Thought