Comments : SUNBEAMS

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert

    I enjoyed reading this poem, mostly because I like to piece parts together, and this poem gave me just that.

    - Good use of words along with metaphor, and it wasnt hard to read. Thanks for sharing

  • 10 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Very good work......captivated me your SUNBEAMS....