I liked this because as the reader I can understand this right away. This person is consumed with thoughts about a lot and it's leaving them sleepless. Nightmares are always terrible when they are real and I liked that because you played with your characters emotilns well. I can see a lot going on here. I loved the imagery as well because it plays out nicely through out. The tone is sadness until the end and then I can see the character being upset at someone. I loved this overall because it tells a nice story. 5/5

Outstanding Poem!!! I loved every word, so creative and wonderful word choice and metophers, I esepically like the first two lines and the last two, BRAVO 100/100