Comments : The Dreaming Tree

  • 6 years ago

    by Kakera

    Heavily, this breathes aching into my chest. Simply amazing.

  • 6 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh good golly, this is beautiful! I could never tire of reading your poetry. Wish I had my very own Auzy anthology to read again and again. And again. (: I love where your writing has gone. So sweet!

  • 6 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I continued reading this poem yet wondering why it struck me like it did. I think I finally understood why. I wrote a poem from the perspective of a branch, not so well written but it's about the opposite of this poem. This one leaves a soothing effect and it has a tone that invites the readers to well read it but it's not just to read it. it's like idk. I really like it. One of my favs from yours.

  • 6 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I really like this. The metaphor seems familiar and obvious, then again, I'm not sure I've heard it quite this way before, or at all. That says something.

    This is my favorite line for reasons I can't explain -

    "how to use my branches for lumber
    during those nights when you need warmth."

  • 6 years ago

    by Skyfire

    I can truly feel the aching in this poem. You've used some beautiful wording.