This is a good poem kaitlyn but there is a concern for me. This is a good attempt at a triple haiku but you left words hanging on the edge. It takes away the flow if the poem I feel. But as for the poem as a whole. I liked it because you put your heart into it again. You really this person and I can tell. When you love someone so very much you would do anything for them. I love that there is passion in this. As the reader I can feel the love into this and I can feel so connected these character. There is happiness inside their heart. Overall I like this because of the consisant tone throughout. The character cone alive through your pen and their personalities shine. Well done

Sweetie this is very beautiful I'm sorry for taking so long I love you

Happy late Anniversary you two :D I hope it was wonderful cause you two deserve it. :)

Beautiful and belated happy 8 anniversary :D