Someone

by Avrii Monrielle   Feb 7, 2014


You
remind me
of a
tattered
newspaper
sitting next to
coffee.

I look at
your face
and read
your name
and chuckle.

You
have a pretty boy
flair
and
I see
it shine.
Do you?

I remember
a vague memory
of you saying
you liked me.
(Did you?)

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  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This poem is fantastic. :). I personally loved how you took one moment and made it very vivid like the objects :). I'm going to pinpoint the ending Because it seems like this person was just a memory or you are remembering what this person was like in the past. I think a person you love has something about them that draws them to you. Anyways this is a beautiful write :)

    • 10 years ago

      by Avrii Monrielle

      Thank you :) hehe this poem is about a boy that used to have a crush on me but i did nothing about it... and years later i like him a little bit :) yes it is what they were like in the past