Then the next one will be better and more will come out.
I can sense the frustration here, of wanting to express emotions but they do not come.
However, you have made a really strong poem, well worded and creative, and I am sure many on here will relate to this, and be thinking " yep, that is me right now!"
I know you will find the words when the time is right, and you will come back with a bang.
Enjoyed this. xx
8 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
This is a fantastic poem for the wording you used is spot on. I loved the story that enfolds. I hate when you keep trying to write over and over again but nothing ever comes out. I liked the line "caressing ink" it seems there like the ink is your only friend. The last line is powerful as well because it stands out. "Just numb". That tells me each time you tried to write you fell deeper into sadness and your heart and emotions became numb. Beautiful wording and poem. 5/5