So sad my friend:( but well written :)

Sad, raw, emotional, heartfelt, this poem bleeds pain and heartbreak, such a beautifull write, truly brought a tear to my eye

Don

I can feel the pain while reading this, my heart was pounding so heavy,, keep on writing, i think your a great poet

Pain is file, that sharpens the mind. You said something I liked as much here, "After shine, comes storm"; but here's what I believe; Within every scar, healing dwells. Pain only comes from what you fear. The little reserved is mighty, if only we can advance it. Before devil came, God drew near. Tame the Past, and name your Future. Cheer on!, you are never alone..

Very well written!

Jolly good show, I normally opt out of reading poems this long but this one gripped me with force. Impressive wording here, without losing sight of the end result and ultimately achieving the goal you set out for this poem, great work.

-Dean.

I'm sorry about your dad.
i hope you're okay though with his death, if you're not, i'm here, i know what you're going through, i have lost somebody i loved as well.
such a beautiful piece as well xx

So sad is this poem,i really hope you and your mom are ok. That you find good ways of making life.

Such a sad, emotional yet gripping and beautiful piece

Take care, Em

Such a sad, emotional yet gripping and beautiful piece

Take care, Em

Sad and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.