Comments : Gone

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I am really glad you were able to write your feelings out. It is always hard to someone you loved. Whether itis you or them to blame it is ssometimes better to just move on. This is really sad because you loved them very much and I can tell it hurts you so much. I loved the ending here. You say goodbye and it is like a finality. Great poem overall

    • 10 years ago

      by Dominique Lewis

      Thank you James. The guy just talked to me in the hallway and I was seriously fighting the tears that were coming on. I had to run back to my class because I started sobbing.

  • 10 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    Awh my poor dear this pain hurts a deep part of me it's really painful to read and to really and truly understand this sad poem 5/5