This yes a lovely poem enjoyed this alot great job you have a greatness about you your poems speak volumes never know what you getting but you always know it's gonna be great same here my friend p&l midnight sky

A fun subject. I really liked the formatting of this one. Simplistic rhyme scheme but it really worked for this kind of poem. I enjoyed the short burst stanzas.

Well done, continue writing and experimenting with the iambic. You are doing a pretty good job.