You need to look up Walt Whitman if you haven't heard of him, this poem reminds me so much of the type of thing he would write were he still alive. Amazing, as usuall I loved it. Keep up the great work. :)
You work is getting better and better. This is really touching, and is way above the normal poem I read on here. This qualifies as professional, no more amateur status on this one. You have chosen the right words, the repetition works, the message is clear and soothing. It does indeed make me want to breathe.
(Going to nominate can you move if from Love Genre so the Judges can see it to consider for the weekly contest.)