Comments : It feels good to breathe.

  • 6 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    You need to look up Walt Whitman if you haven't heard of him, this poem reminds me so much of the type of thing he would write were he still alive. Amazing, as usuall I loved it. Keep up the great work. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You work is getting better and better. This is really touching, and is way above the normal poem I read on here. This qualifies as professional, no more amateur status on this one. You have chosen the right words, the repetition works, the message is clear and soothing. It does indeed make me want to breathe.

    (Going to nominate can you move if from Love Genre so the Judges can see it to consider for the weekly contest.)

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    First off I like the repetition in this poem and just like the sea, like the waves it pulls the mind and calls it gently towards it, beautifully penned and as Sylvia said its professional!

  • 5 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Breathe :p