Your writing always has a great way to touch a heart. This is very dark and twisted but so well written. Really enjoyed the imagery and writing. In the first stanza you should take away the word "most" it will flow more smoothly. But otherwise sometimes all we want is for the other person to feel what we feel. It's so damn hard to explain how we feel.:). Anyway the title isPERFECT bbecause it explains what the deeper meaning of the poem is. I fell in love with this the first time I read it. It is simple but not really simple haha. I'm going to nominate this on Monday because it reallytouched me.

I love this poem. It seems so amazing and has so much emotion behind each word, each line.. each stanza. I love it!

This poem really talks to me because we all want that one person who will actually see who we really are, the things we think and everything like that!