Wow this is really beautiful o far, 100/100

Wow so i guess im not the only one with horror

*hides knife* Nope

Check the rhyming a bit on this one too! You've got your end rhymes spot on, but again, the structure is a bit loose; try to make it constant! :)

But the message, and more importantly, your feelings were conveyed greatly. From this one could imagine how much pain they must be in to have become acquainted with such a dangerous object, as well as how they might feel rather lonely due to them stating that the static object and them self supposedly spends quite a lot of time with one another.

If you're ever feeling down; feel welcome to send a few words or so to me!