Comments : Moonlight June

  • 10 years ago

    by LoneWolf

    This poem expresses Great feeling of a severance of a tie from another. It expresses the moment specifically and then after the next few months of emotional scarring that you could never forget. I know this feeling, so I meditated and thought about it, and then I learned how to snip and sever emotional ties before they grow stronger, so that they don't take control of me. Now I live a bit depressed, but in my mind I am free.

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I would love to pick out a favorite line/stanza but can't as they all are simply tender and heart felt. Your voice resonates within this write...lovely, lovely write.

    To combine 6 poems in one and at the same time making it sound perfect takes not only time but also talent...fantastic work!