Comments : My original writing of The Great Deceptipon

  • 9 years ago

    by MissMana

    This was such a neat poem. Sad, a little, but I enjoyed it. I broke up with my partner a year ago now, it was an interesting experience and I wanted her to hurt like I did but it only consumed my thought's. In turn hurting me more than it did her. writing helped and understanding it was for the best. this poem brought me to thoughts of that, lol. anyways good poem, love the last verse.

    S.M.I.L.E

    • 9 years ago

      by Tanya

      Thank you and im glad you liked it...