I love the story and also they way it flowed not to mention the rhyme scheme is beautiful my favorite part of this lovely poem would have to be

you'd have made someone a good wife
before the deputy took away your life

That part struck a cord in my soul for many can relate to this part for many lives have been ended by corrupt police men innocent or not the victim great work here was a very good read 5/5

Nicely Written!

It certainly tells a potent tale on a steady rhyme. It feels folksy and downtrodden, like an american beat poem.