My Love

by jeana harkins   May 19, 2014


YOU ARE MY LIGHT WHEN I NEED TO SEE
YOU ARE MY SHELTER ON A DARK AND STORMY NIGHT
YOU ARE THE BLOOD THAT COURSES THROUGH MY VEINS
YOU ARE THE AIR THAT I BREATHE
YOU ARE THE REASON I AWAKE SMILING
YOU ARE MY KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR WHEN I NEED A HERO
YOU ARE THE REASON I WANT TO BETTER MYSELF
YOU ARE THE REASON I AM WHO I AM
YOU ARE MY LOVER MY Co arses MY NOW MY FUTURE MY END MY FOREVER
YOU ARE MY LOVE

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  • 11 years ago

    by LoneWolf

    It seems a bit cliche and personally I think a few of these statements are overused when speaking of things like these (take knight in shining armor for example). Personally I don't mind the lack of rhyme (although it does add great spice to a poem) and I like free verse poetry just as much as any other form, but I bet if you were to turn off the caps lock and add some of your own personal and unique thoughts on this it would turn out to be great. I can see that you are new here so this is a great start! PM Me anytime

  • 11 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    Your poem lacks the flow of rhymes, and it was a little bumpy when reading it. but keep up the writing, you have potential