Comments : Complicated Love

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    It's beautiful and cute also it needs a few grammar here and there not to mention capitilatzation but other than that it's really is adorable my dear 4/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Lovely poems that pours out the love and emotions which you feel for this person.
    A deep seeded love that truly was able to radiate throughout this poem.
    Very well done.
    55

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    What a lovely sentiment throughout the poem, your love for this woman is unquestionable in your words, the depth of emotion is captivating , as joker queen stated, there's a few matters of grammar issues, but all in all it's a very pretty piece :-)